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作者词汇量积累不错，高级词汇积累较少；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨。
4/9/2017 it is a nice day today. I woke up little earlier than yesterday. I am busy with english .learning English and go to work. English really drives me crazy . I make me forces on English. I live in the US, I have to learn English ,English skills can give me a better live .talking ,writing, speaking and listening, I have been studying so hard in three years. compare to the first year from now on, I feel my English is changing a lot. now I can communicate with other people. I found a job that need to answer the phone and made a order for people who wants order food. all day and all night I've tried to spend free time to learn English and I always feel my English improve so slow. I want to improve my English as fast as I can, I always feel little disappointed by the speed of English. but retrospect now i realize I had a test at university just only two months ago ,that's mean my English has improved a lot in two months . i have to tell myself to calm down ,learning another language is one of the hardest thing in the world .i've just only spent three years to learn. it is a big success for me now .be happy everyday. learning step by step .just never give it up .
