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The best place in my hometown I am very glad you can come to my honmtown. When you come in, I will take you to the most beautiful place in my honetown, that is The Great Wall. Their are some reasons Iwant to tell you. firstly, The Great Wall was one of the oldest culture in Chinese. Everytime, their will have many people go to see it. In their ,you can find a different China. Secondly, their are lots of delicuse food and it's very beautiful place. What do you think?
