增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;结构较为严谨,文中衔接成分很少;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
The most interesting place I am very glad to you when I know you will visit my campus.It is beautiful to my campus. There are many tall and green trees and briage.But my favourite is RuoYu lack. RuoYU lack is set up cultuer centre .It is not large but beautiful.There has a boat on the lack.When the sun put up it,It is more attrictive to us with ligh and glittering.On the side of Ruoyu lack is culture center.Many activerties are held on culture centure.Whatsmore,Threr are some chairs on the side of lack.When you tired,you can set back.I believe you will be like it. I am foraward tocoming my campus to you.And I think you will glad to this visit.