2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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The most interesting place I am very glad to you when I know you will visit my campus.It is beautiful to my campus. My school have a lot things attract to me. There are many tall and green trees and bridge.As far as I am concern, my favourite is RuoYu lack. RuoYU lack is set up culture centre .It is not large but beautiful.What's more,there has a boat on the lack.When the sun put up it,It is more attact to us with ligh and glittering.On the side of Ruoyu lack is culture center.Many activities are held on culture centure.And then,there are some chairs on the side of lack.When you tired,you can set back.I believe you will be like it. I am foraward to coming my campus to you.And I think you will glad to this visit.