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The most interesting place I am very glad to you when I know you will visit my campus.It is beautiful to my campus. My school has many things attract to me. There are many tall and green trees and bridge.As far as I am concerned, my favorite is RuoYu lack. RuoYU lack is set up culture centre .It is not large but beautiful.What's more,there has boat on the lack.When the sun put up it,It is more attract to us with light and glittering.On the side of Ruoyu lack is culture center.Many activities are held on culture centre.And then,there are some chairs on the side of lack.When you tired,you can set back.I believe you will be like it. I am forward to coming my campus to you.And I think you will glad to this visit.