2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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The most interesting place I am very glad to you when I know you will visit my campus.It is beautiful to my campus. My school has many things attract to me. There are many tall and green trees and bridge.As far as I am concerned, my favorite is RuoYu lake. RuoYU lake is set up culture centre.It is not large but beautiful.What's more,there ia a boat on the lake.When the sun put up it,It is more attract to us with light and glittering.On the side of Ruoyu lake is culture center.Many activities are held on culture centre.And then,there are some chairs on the side of lake.When you tired,you can set back.To sum up,I believe you will be like it. I am forward to coming my campus to you.And I think you will glad to this visit.