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Nowadays, a university student who want to success is not only work hard on study. He/She must have outstanding personal quality among all the students. In my opinion, the most important personal quality are careful, helpful and communitive. To begin with, carefulness will make everything smoothly. When you are trying to achieve a goal, no matter simple or complicated, if you are careful during the proccess and make no mistake, the goal will be achieved every soon. Otherwise, you will spent a large sum of in doing a simple thing. Besides, helpfulness will give others warmness. As we all know, university is like a fiction society. In this society, we should know how to help others. When others are in a corner, you can give him a hand and help him out, which gives him warmness and happiness. It likes the old saying that many hands make light work. Give others a hand and they will give you back when you need. Furthermore, communication will break the barrier, As university student, you likely to be a positive and outgoing. Communication is the new sight into the world outside the ivory tower. A communitive man is more easy-going and have more friends. This personal quality is a way to further success and will lead you to a heyday of your career. In a word, careful, helpful and communitive, these quality can make you a popular man and give you success.
