小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

My best friend is yardy, she is tall and slim. many students in our class like her.She like smile and help other out .One day,I was cried she came to me and asked me what was happen.After I tell her ,she made me happy and play together with me.And then we become best friend we always stay together .she is so open and optimistic that I never fell sad again.I like my best friend