正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear fred, I am so glad to fort your letter. you want to you know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. You can’t imagine how happy I am! At first, I will have a good sleep because I often stays up in the past two months. Next, I am going to watch TV. I like playing basketball so much, so I will enjoy some basketball matches on it. I will also go to the bookstore and buy a litle interesting books so that I can spend a good summer vacation. How about you? Please write to me soon. Best wishes! Yours, David
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