Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From the able, we know that people's income is lin to their education levels. A high educated individual earn much more than others. Obviously, the table show us the fact that a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. However,only a high degree can get a person bright future? I think it is wrong.The reasons are as follows. Fristly, the society needs the characters who are high IQ and high EQ, not the high education. Secondly, an empolyer only pays for people's ability and performance, not for their certificate.Thirdly,employer perfer to hire and pay more to specially trained people rather than fresh college graducaters. In conclusion, if you want to get high salary, you need to have not only high degree, but also to have all kinds of abilitivies.