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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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From the table, we do know that people's income is lin to their education levels. A high educated individual earn much more than others. Obviously, the table shows us the fact that a degree does bring financial benefits to its holders. Nevertheless, merely a high degree can get a person bright future? I hold the view that it is erroneous. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, the society needs the characters who are high IQ and high EQ, not the high education. Secondly, an employer only pays for people's ability and performance, not for their certificates.Thirdly, employers prefer to hire and pay more to specially trained people rather than fresh college graduates. In conclusion, if you want to get high salary, you are required having not only high degree, but also to have all kinds of abilities.

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