2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者词汇量积累不错，一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活，有个别拼写错误；从句使用量太少；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。

Nowadays ,a different kind of products are packed by people.It make a good quality in many people"s thought.But is it the truth,no. With the buseness development,lots of products are created.So this led to competition.What the buseness man should do?They pack the productsin many area,Such as finding the super stars or famous people to be the advertising spokesperson.Making their product looks like the best. In my opinion,people should make a wise decision.Buying products should choose their quality,not the star effect. Some of buesness man in order to slove bad products,they advertise to cheat consumer. This behave obeys rule about buesness.Our country should do some efficail measures to stop it.