采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
With the developing of the technology, the Internet has become a part of people's life. More and more people make friends online especially young people.However,for my part,i think it is not wise to make friends online. The main reasons are as fowllow:first and foremost,there exist a lot of unreal information that are very attractive.If we believe these unreal information,we will be cheatd even trap into a bad situation.In addition, in my opinion, the Interner world is a virtual world,we can not identify what is good or what is bad better.Besides,everyone can hide his or her real appearance and real personality in the virtual world. Moreover,making friends online make us lose the interpersonal skills in real life,and it is not good for us to shap a good personality and to build a nice friendship.Worse still,we have no chances to communicate with our friends face to face,which will result in we lose the joy of making friends for long run. TO sum up,in my point of view,i am not approve that we make friends online,we should make friends in reality.Making friends in real life we will find more joy and more cherish our friendship.
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