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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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It is invisible to make a conclusion immediately once you hear or see something. Why do we say it ? Because when we hear or see something ,maybe the content is just a part of the whole thing. Always it makes a sharp distiction between the single detail and the detail included in the whole thing. When i was young , i heard a story about cofucius and his disciples. One day approaching to the dinner time , confucius saw his disciple eating rices alone hiding in the dining room. Confucius hold that his disciple was impolite to have dinner withouting waiting other people. So Confucius walked into the room and critizied him. Then his disciple explained that he just to eat the drop rices only. He did not want to be wasted. Confucius learned to know what you saw perhaps was not authentic, you needed to detected the whole thing. Then you have the right to judge something or make a conclusion. There is another situation that you just think of the superficial meaning about what you see or hear. Through thought for a while , maybe you can find the further meaning of the matter. Some matters are not simply understood at the begining. It takes a while for digestion and aborbing. So do not be rush for everything. Reviewing and thinking for many times is more visible to us to have a conclusion

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