2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of August of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying more great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to back home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition these tradition activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。