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增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；请作者增加词汇丰富度；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。
From: Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date : December 23 rd, 2008 To: sales-department@@hotmail.com Subject: Check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, We have received the 3,000 products from your company on December 22nd, 2008, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products should be 3,500, the other 500 products we have not received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours faithfully, Wang Hai yang From:wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date:Dec.23rd.,2008 To:sales-department@hotmail.com Subject:check the product list Dear Mr.Johnson, We have received the 3,000 products from your company on Dec.22nd.,2008,But according to our signing of the No.35 order,the number of product should be 3,500 ,the other 500 products we haven't received so far.Please check your product list,We are looking forward to your early reply! Your faithfully Wang Haiyang
