文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇的使用还需加强;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
There is no doubt that make a quick decision is unintellgence whevener you see or listen to anything. For exemple. When information enters your brain. Firstly, You should sort information afterward maken decision. Secondly,Our eyes and ears sometimes will deceive us. Because we can not insure this information is true or false. And the very important is it easily maken the wrong decision. As the thing goes: look before you leap. Do things carefully.
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