单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend. She is very cute girl. And her name is lin lin. She has long black hair and big eyes. She is good at singing and won some awards. She is very clever. She has a little brother. She was 5 years old when we met. She likes reading books. We are classmates.