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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11299
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;全文结构较为严谨。

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From the picture, we can see that people crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. What makes this phenomenon is that people are growing increasingly dependent on the cell phone. Nowadays, there is no doubt that the cell phone brings many benefits for us. However, if we overuse it, it will lead to many bad consequences. Firstly, cell phones contain radiation which hurts individuals' body. Some people die of cancer because of radiation from cell phones. Secondly, cell phones distract our attention about discovering the beauty of life. People pay their attention on the cell phone and they do not go out. The last but not least, when people spend too much time on their cellphones, they do not have enough chances to communicate with their parents and their friends. There are no denying that cell phones have brought us considerable convenient. Nonetheless, we should be aware of negative effects that cell phones have brought to us.

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