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Nowadays, online shopping has become a fashion. People, especially youngsters are fond of shopping online. There are many reasons why people like shopping online. First of all, it is convenient, people just need a mobile phone or a computer and then they can buy the things they want without going out. In addition, the commodities online are cheaper than those of the real shops. That is because the online shops don't have to pay money for shop renting, which cut down the prices of commodities. Although online shopping has lots of advantages, there are also many disadvantages on it. Firstly, you can only see the pictures of the commodities, so the quality is unknown. Secondly, there are some risks in online paying. You are likely to give away you personal information when you are paying online. In conclusion, every coin has two sides. We are supposed to shop online rationally and appropriately, only in this way can we enjoy the benefits the online shopping brings to us.
