高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章词汇使用比较恰当，高级词汇积累不足。

In the past .There were lots of trees around mu hometown and the fish swam happily in the clear lake.the house was old and the street was narrow .People works hard but life were difficult.At the moment there are many high buildings,factories and shops in my hometown.Different cars are droven in the road.As the industry develop quickly the environment is getting worse and worse.The number of trees and fish are cut down.It is important for us to govern pollution.