2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

可增加文中从句的使用量；文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者词汇表达丰富度较高，就是高级词汇用的太少。

my view on online shopping online shopping is an fashion activity ,many youth like them.In the modern online shopping turned very convinces ,its let you save more times ,it bring you more and more interesting things. through the internect ,you can chose your favourite goods, you still chose many goods .but it is still a bad advantage, if your good was send your home ,but you found it quality is bad ,then you need to change or refund ,you should send to your goods company then it bring some trouble ,it could increased your work ,you need to agruement to talk to company. but I think online shopping still is a funny things most people love it