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江苏省盐城市初级中学2011届九年级上学期期末考试写作:与父母相处的问题

发布时间:2013-06-24 18:03浏览次数:2121
要求:
你将代表学校参加盐城市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:


现象

经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话

原因
1、父母过分关注分数
2、我们……

措施(不少于三点)
1、我们应该和父母沟通
2、我们……
3、我们……

要求:

1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;
3、词数:100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4、不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.
These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. ____________________
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    That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;从句偏少,建议平时练习中加强从句的练习;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

用户练习作文:

How to get along well with your parents? I get on well with my parents . I love them very much . After supper , We always watch TV ,talking the things happen to us today . We are very happy to spend time playing games together . Although sometimes we in disagreement ,it can't continue for one day . Once I failed my test , they weren't angry with me. Instead , they helped me find out the reason and help me find comfidence anew . And at the next exam , I was successful. I think we should spend more our free time chatting with them and telling them something about yourself they want to know.Next regard your parents as your friends. We are in youthhood now . We begin to hate our parents' chatter.We always like talking to our friends than to our parents . We always think our parents can't know us better than our friends. But we don't know it's love.Finally,study hard . Although we may not get the one prise , our parents will be very happiness.

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