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On the last weekends,I was going to the zoo in BeiJing.I saw some visitor were gave some food with monkeys.And they piayed with tiger.The animal weregood for people.I think we should be good for animal,and we should protect environment.I think protect environment is important for us,We shouldn't drop litter.Because we protect animal is protect ourself.