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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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Maintaining trust is the basic requirement in building a harmonious relationship.We can live an easier living with trust and don't always have to be skeptical to other people and things. However,people seem to have much difficulty in trusting each other nowadays.They are skeptical to the kindness from other people,which is considered as a self-protection.That is reasonable.With the development of internet and technology,many cheating tricks are being invented every minutes.If not maintaining alert,our property and safety will be in danger. As a result,it is a question how to maintaining trust while assuring that our safety and property is under protection.As far as I am concerned,the resolution is to take care of your privacy.For example,you can talk freely with a stranger on a bench in the park,aside from your own privacy,such as your family,living address,etc. The society is changing without your consciousness.No matter you like them or not,your life still have to move on.Sometimes, adjustment is very important.So maintaining trust,and at the same time,protecting yourself.

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