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if a person want to success, he have to develop a good learning habit.Becuase a good lerning habit can depend on your learning effects. So having a good learning habit is very important. As far as i am concerned , I think reviewing is a good learning habit. Not only counld you grasp knowledge better, but also you can gain a new point. And you don not waste too much time to it, only every day keeping up. I also have a problem in how to balance make notes betwen listen to teachers.