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文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
what is my meaningful life? i usally think about it. and now i guess i can talk about my thought with you. in my opinions, the meanful life's means are as follow. first, you must get happy from it. when you do something,you must don't want it make you sad,right? because happy can be a power that can push you to complete the thing. second, you may get the feel of need from everybody. you will feel accountable when someone need you to do something. even if that thing is very small, you can also feel happy from it. third, do something you really like is also a important point to make life meaningful. because you like it and you want to know it. actually, i will apart some activities i really like, such as running, swimming. and i really want to have a talk with my friends whose know something i like. what your thoughts of meaningful life?
