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作者词汇使用熟练灵活，但要注意避免拼写错误；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
what makes a meaningful life? it's wealth, power or slif-value? LI Kaifu, the CEO of Google, has wrote a book named to be the best of yourself. It illustrates a phenomiment that a number of Chinese college students have no dreams and what they do is just walking on the path set by parents. Education aimed to cultivate independent thinking among young generation, however, the number of young people who really spend time realizing self-value is few. I am impressed by words in the book that the greatset use of life is to realize self-value. As China has became the second biggest economy, more talents and expertisers are in need. Therefore, for the young generation, to live a meaningful life means to shoulder our due responsibility to contribute to build a better China. In order to achieve this goal, we college students should combine our career plans with country needs, making efforts to study and practice professional skills. For example, English majors not only can be teachers, instand, out country badly needs skilled Chinese-English interpretors to help spreading Chinese cultures. Above all, spending life on realizing self-value in building homeland is the best way to live a life.
可可英语 - 划词释义
