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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练使用了一些长难句。
save money is an important thing. Everyone cost money for everywhere ,if you have enough money your life will have a big problem. I think as a student parent's pay to a student all kinds fee ,it bring very hard for a family if a student often save money or take part time job they should easily for their life,as a family save money also important. family has a lot of bill if rely on the salary every month ,then I think it balance haven't too much so I think if you save less money every month ,when you need to used this money,you don't realize this is a problem, you were able to take money ,then you will feel better. in closing ,save is an important thing, save money you life will better than before.
