文章组织结构良好;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强。
Our house is a two story house . It has downstir and upstrair. In the downstair ,It include kitchen living room and garbage, upstair include three bedrooms and two bathroom. A bedroom is mine and other is my sister's.In my bedroom ,has a big bed, still has a small desk,and dressstand ,usually I write my homework and with my sister play games.living room is very big ,we sit sofa and watched TV sometimes we also do some other work. kitchen is a cooked place. Mom cooks delicious food every day,we are very happy we like our house I love my home