小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DUDU is night years,DUDU have a lit fat, but i stilll love she.she is a cute guy.BUT my mother don't like she,becuse she want ruin everything.she is a dog, dog just like ruin everything.THIS is she's nature.so,i don't blame she.she don't know she can or can't what.