2015年高考作文优秀范文：中国结

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中高级词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Dear Tom， How is everything going? I am writing to you to ask you do a a favor,I am wondering that whether you can help me sell some Chinese knots. I made them on my own with silk,cloth and some other materials. These knots are about 4 inches long and 2 inches broad. The color is red and I promise that all of these knots are beautiful. By the way, I want you to sell them at 12 dollars each, which is not too expensive. The Chinese knot is typical of friendship.love and good luck,which can be send to others as gifts. If the customers are keen on knowing more about the Chinese knots,please ask them to write to me. I will be very grateful that if you can do me the favor. Please rely me as soon as possible. Yous， Lihua