作者词汇基础扎实;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
The main content of the passage is that we can't deny the fact that ordinary jobs are indispensable to the development of a society,thus it's necessary to give them respect. As far as I am concerned, ordinary jobs, no matter small or big, indeed deserve everyone's respect and attention,such as cleaners, whose job is so ordinary but is of great importance to our daily life. Cleaners are making arduous efforts to clean streets,which is a tiresome job. Without cleaners, our living environment is bound to be in a mess. What's worse, we even can't live on the earth as ease as before. Therefore, it's vital for us to attach great importance to those ordinary and dull jobs in that every small job can make a great difference to the whole society.