小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

i have a good friend his name is Tom. we were become friends when we were at the praimary school .we do home work every day we play games every day .i love him we can go to school and whatch the tekevision .we go to the home toghther .every day i feel very happy with him because he is my best friend.