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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量。
At present,more and more people would like to communicat with others by internet. Whatever they are too busy, they will spend much time on having line everyday, the first thing they do when weak up in the morning is take their mobile phone,to our sad, People often play cell in WC or bathroom, So sometimes, the cell will drop to kennel. There are many people dead account for traffic accident in China, And the majority of those are themselves fault, They are careless, they prefer to play their cell on the highway, Accordingly,the miserable accidents happend. From my point of view,it's impossible for electronic to take the place of the communication way face-to-face, Beacuse the way that keeping touch with friends or colleague and so on is only for exchanging information rather than emotion,we can't see face each other, and we can't give ourselves family members a love kiss,It's so boring for me. In the end, I do hope everybody is strict with yourselves to change the occasion,Beacuse we are looking forward to having a world, and it's full of love!
