作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;采用了一些简单的从句;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent In recent year,more and more parents prepared anything to their children.About eat,drink,school,girl friends or boy friends... Many people think it is not a good idea to tend child.They should be do their own like things not parent like things.So ,it is unwise to make the children grow up. In order to let children independent,First,i think people should choose theirs child own like things.Don't added the child not like things like learning piano,planting,swimming and so on.Next,put your free time to talk with your child.listen to their's hobby,study,relationship.try to know more about you child's idea.Moreover,you can let your child study how to do the housework at they 7 years old.not let they noly do the homework.You should parctise their's ability when they were young.Finally,you have to promise you don't look through their's diary.everyone also have own's secret.you can ask them but you can not look it unless your child not approve. Every parents really like their children,i think the children also know the parent's heart.Please try to belive your child,don't let your press and unhappy things add at their body.