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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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The service result is from American Labor website. Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers. You will see the trend that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. In the 21st century, people know how high a priority is education for their children. There is a Chinese proverb that"reading a lot and travelling a lot" and Gorky also said"Books are the stepping stones to human progress." So it is so important to us to have knowledge, we need to pay more time and money for our child's education so that they will have more choices in seeking a job in the future. People go university and gain more knowledge not only for the bachelor degree, but also for improve ourselves and open our eyes. Knowledge is your strong background, knowledge is strength.

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