2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文章能较灵活使用词汇，高级词汇有些少，还需注意个别拼写错误。

Nowadays, cell phone already became usually things,almost everyone has a cell phone. It is very convininces, it is connecting each other, before people meet new friends need invited party and other occasion,now if you want to meet new friend,you only take your cell phone shrink and shrink you could make new friends, secondly,if you want to know news ,you though cell phone to read news,download other knowledge,it is really connice.but people don't concentrate for cell phone for example ,across road please don't see your cell phone ,most of the accident are cased.so,cell phone give people bring advantage sometimes it also bring distory.