2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文章词汇表达丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

When it comes to my favourite city,countless city run through my mind,but ,what is impressed on me most is XiAn. The well-known proverb that xian is a very odd city which has been located in ShanXi province of China,and it has 2000 years history.In China,xian was called "odd city which through six countries of odd China.so,if you wang to see the odd building,I think you should go to xian,because it has many odd building. In addition,xian has many good foods,example,"Che Mian" is a very good food,if you want to eat the food,let's come to xian. Finally,I would like to mention is that the one of the eight grand special place which has located in xian.