小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；适当丰富句式；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Llli is my good friend.She is very beautiful.She has long black hair and big eyes that look likes a top what I alway paly for her. I like her,because she can swing in the blue shy.She tell me if I am 18,that she will take the plane wiht me. Lili 's father is a teacher that tech me English.But I don't like him.He alway said I am stupid when I can't spell the word in the class.