2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分高级词汇；作者句法基础较为扎实。

When it comes to my favourite city,countless city run through my mind,but,what is impressed on me most is XiAn. The well-known proverb that xian is a very ancient city which has been located in ShanXi province of China,and it has 2000 years history. In China, xian was called ancient city which through six countries of odd China.So,if you want to see the ancient building,I think you should go to xian,because it has many ancient buildings. In addition, xian has many good food,example,"Che Mian" is a very good food,if you want to eat the food, let's come to xian. Finally,I would like to mention is that the one of the eight grand special places which has located in xian.