文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;从句使用不熟练;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
My favourite subject We have many subjects at school, Chinese, English, math, art and so on. But my favourite subject is English. I often watch English programs and movies. I talk with my friends in English on QQ.Everyday I read and speak English .So I am good at English. I won first prize in the English competition last year. English is very important . Learning English well will help us find a good job in the future. I want to be an English teacher in the future. I am going to university .I must work hard.