单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;从句不足,简单句比重高;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Litao is my new English teacher in the new school.I like him very much.In my class,he always teach me something on the word what I can't see .My English is poor.Sometime I don't like say English with anyone.But he always told me:you are the best student in my class.Mybe you sick in the English,you good at Chinese.You must believe you can.