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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；连词使用偏少。
Hi KPOHsales, I'm lucky enough to have had a glimps of the product called "5670" that belongs to your company.I saw it on the display held in NewYork during 15.December to 22.December. Somehow, hardly had I came across it ,when I was fond of it.so I'm writting to you to send me the price list and instruction . Thank you for coorperation and I wish we could establish business relationship. Looking forward to your reply!
