2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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the mid-autumn festival is the tranditional festival of china,which is in the lunar calendar 15th the august. we like to get together with our family on that day,which day we often like to see the moon and eat the mooncake . or you don't like to do that things ,we can choose to have a family travel,or see our friends or family.