采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基础不错,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。
Currently, there are many dishonest phenomenon in our life. For example, businessmen sell fake product to cheat their customers. Students cheat in the exam for the reason that they want to get good grades. Some olders pretend to wrestle to cheat money. Although there are mang bad phenomenon in our life, we should be a honest indivdual. The reasons are as follows. Fristly.those who always tell truth or keep their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Secondly, most people like to make friends with indivduals, who are trustable and respectable. The last but not least, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job.Every employer wants his employees to be honest, I always hold the point that honesty wins trust, respect and honor, so it is important that we should be honest.