采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加几条从句;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Currently, there are many dishonest phenomenons in our life. For example, businessmen sell fake product to cheat their customers. Students cheat in the exam for the reason that they want to get good grades. Some olders pretend to wrestle to cheat others' money. Although there are many bad phenomenons in our life, we should be an honest individual. The factors are as follows. Fristly, those who always tell truth or keep their promises not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Secondly, the majority of the population people like to make friends with individuals, who are trustable and respectable. Last but not least, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job.Every employer wants his employees to be honest, I always hold the point that honesty wins trust, respect and honor, thus it is indispensable that we should be honest.