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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些语言不流畅。
From: hubin@163.com TO: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear Sir, I was introduced about your company's new product of PO#5670 during the exhibition in NEW YORK from the 15th October to the 22th October,and I'm very interested about it. Could you pls advice us a rate sheet and an product discription? We'll be very appriciate for your corperation and hope we can establish an trade relationship between us. Thank you. Yours Sincerely
