采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
Currently, there are many dishonest phenomena in our life. For example, businessmen sell fake product to cheat their customers. Students cheat in the exam for the contributor that they want to get good grades. Some olders pretend to wrestle to cheat others' money. Although there are many bad phenomena in our life, we should be an honest individual. The factors are as follows. Firstly, those who always tell truth or keep their promises not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Secondly, the majority of the population people like to make friends with individuals, who are trustable and respectable. Last but not least, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job.Every employer wants his employees to be honest, I always hold the point that honesty wins trust, respect and honor, thus it is indispensable that we should be honest.