正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;语言不流畅。
From: Li Ming Date: Dec. 23rd, 2008 To: Mary Subject: Memo Dear Mary, As It's time for me to go to Beijing on business for a week, I could not join you to discuss those details for company holding a party on New Year's day. It's up to you to advise me of the time and the place you decide on, and also tell me what should I prepare for? Thank you. Best Regards, Li Ming